Revise paste My Second Lobby DataStore (STORY GAME)

local TeleportService = game:GetService("TeleportService")

local VIP = 64418164

local LivesSave = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("Lives")

game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
	local previousData = LivesSave:GetAsync(player.UserId) -- Returns a number value.

local Lives

if previousData ~= nil then
		Lives = previousData
	else
		Lives = 0
		LivesSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, 0)
	end

local LivesValue = Instance.new("IntValue", player)
	LivesValue.Name = "Lives"
	LivesValue.Value = Lives

player.Lives.Value = 3
	
end)

game:BindToClose(function() -- Runs whenver the server is about to shut down/stop.
	print("STOPPED!")

for i,player in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do
		local value = player.Lives.Value
		LivesSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, value)
		print("Saved data for "..player.Name)
	end
end)

game.Players.PlayerRemoving:Connect(function(player)
	local value = player.Lives.Value

if value ~= nil then
		print("Found data to save for "..player.Name.."!")
		LivesSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, value)
		print("Saved data for "..player.Name)
	else
		print("Did not manage to find data to save for "..player.Name.."!")
	end
end)

local CoinsSave = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("Coins")

game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
	local previousData = CoinsSave:GetAsync(player.UserId) -- Returns a number value.

local Coins

if previousData ~= nil then
		Coins = previousData
	else
		Coins = 0
		CoinsSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, 0)
	end

local coinsValue = Instance.new("IntValue", player)
	coinsValue.Name = "Coins"
	coinsValue.Value = Coins

if game:GetService("MarketplaceService"):UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId, VIP) then
		player.Coins.Value = player.Coins.Value * 2
	end
end)

game:BindToClose(function() -- Runs whenver the server is about to shut down/stop.
	print("STOPPED!")

for i,player in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do
		local value = player.Coins.Value
		CoinsSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, value)
		print("Saved data for "..player.Name)
	end
end)

game.Players.PlayerRemoving:Connect(function(player)
	local value = player.Coins.Value

if value ~= nil then
		print("Found data to save for "..player.Name.."!")
		CoinsSave:SetAsync(player.UserId, value)
		print("Saved data for "..player.Name)
	else
		print("Did not manage to find data to save for "..player.Name.."!")
	end
end)